Lord of The Flies - Chapter 1
Sound of The Shell
Perspective - Jack
That Noise
Today was a very weird day. The choir and I where woke up on a island that we didn't know we where supposed to be on. Our plane crash-landed and nobody can remember what happened. We all started to scavenger and we found a jungle and a huge mountain. The mountain had some pink stuff on it. We walked around for a little bit and couldn’t find anybody else from our plane. Then after a while we heard a ear-piercing sound coming from the reef. We walked towards the noise and we found a lot of younger kids from the flight. The boy who made the noise was standing in front of everybody else and had a big shell in his hand. We walked toward him and he told us that his name was Ralph. Ralph wanted to have a village type thing since there where no adults there. The boys thought that we should have a leader for this "village". So they had a vote and voted Ralph instead of me. So Ralph, Simon, and I. We all went to look around and found a bog rock for the mountain. We used our strength to move the rock and then climbed up the rest of the mountain. Then we went back to the kids.
1 comments:
I like the "ear piercing sound" it sounded really descriptive. I also like how you talked about the choir because in the book it didn't talk much about them. I also like how you described Ralph. It really seemed like you were Jack. Good job Levi!
-Silvia
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